Monday, 23 February 2015

Writing full of emotion

Jim's Yuk Fall
It tasted yucky and disgusting. It was gooey and it went up my nose! It looked like a mud pie and I couldn’t get out of the horrible mess. It was repulsive! It turned into a whirlpool of mud. I got sucked down and couldn’t see anything. I felt spiders all on me.

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